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majorbabs	Post subject: A rose is a rose is a ... relative? Posted: Tue May 28, 2002 4:13 pm
Joined: Tue Apr 09, 2002 12:01 am Posts: 744 Location: HuskerLand	From a Reuters story:<p>"The protagonists in Sunday's bloodbath were the wives and granddaughters of Camorra gangster families, the Mafia organization that operates in and around the southern Italian city of Naples. <p>One car full of Cava family women and another car with Camorra boss Salvatore Graziano, his granddaughters and their mother showered each other with bullets in the prolonged shootout in Lauro, a town east of Naples. Two middle-aged mothers and a 16-year-old girl were killed."<p>What if the story had said:" ... his grandsons and their father showered each other with bullets ... Two middle-aged fathers and a 16-year-old boy were killed."<p>[ May 28, 2002: Message edited by: majorbabs ]</p>
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ADKbrown	Post subject: Re: A rose is a rose is a ... relative? Posted: Wed May 29, 2002 7:32 pm
Joined: Tue Apr 09, 2002 12:01 am Posts: 1286 Location: Saranac Lake, N.Y.	You're right about the sexism. But I'm trying to figure out how Graziano and his grandaughters could have the same mother and how two cars can shoot bullets at each other (were these James Bond cars?).
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