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 Post subject: Turn, turn, turn
PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2003 2:16 am 
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WASHINGTON (AP) - It was the day the war turned ugly for the allies fighting it, the leaders running it and anyone who saw the images at home.<p>***Wars start ugly, continue ugly, and end ugly. The only thing that turned Sunday was my stomach. This lede did not help.***


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 Post subject: Re: Turn, turn, turn
PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2003 2:25 am 
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Oh, and further down the same story:<p>"It's not that everything was suddenly going wrong. It just seemed that way after a start that seemed to go almost all right."<p>***A more debatable sentence was never written. No matter what one thinks of this war, it's absurd to say that the death and destruction that have occurred on both sides since Wednesday are "all right." And I suspect that hundreds of thousands of protesters worldwide think things were not "all right." Sunday was just a particularly bad day in a particularly bad time. If this is what AP is passing off as "news analysis," I will just have to let my readers draw their own conclusions.***


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 Post subject: Re: Turn, turn, turn
PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2003 2:31 am 
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And one more thing:<p>"No one expected Sunday's setbacks to throw the United States or Britain off course. They've got 250,000 soldiers, sailors and aviators in place and their destination is Baghdad."<p>***I've got a 20-inch hole to fill and the destination of your sycophantic ass is the trash basket.***


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